This was so much fun to read!
“She…”
Who’s that?
What?
Who’s she?
The woman in the story. I don’t know. I haven’t named her yet.
How are we supposed to like her if she hasn’t got a name?
How do you know you’re supposed to like her? Maybe she’s a thief.
Is she going to be a thief?
Possibly. Maybe I want to save that detail as a surprise to the reader.
Readers don’t like surprises.
Um, “Marylyn…”
That’s a weird spelling.
“Alright. “Marilyn…”
No. Too Marilyn Monroe-ish.
What?
You’ll need a male character who looks like Clark Gable.
I’m not writing a 1950s black-and-white movie.
Nice hyphens.
Look, I’ll call her George or Bill. It disguises her sexuality.
Oh, how au currant.
Could I just write something?!
Sure. Go head. We’ll wait.
Alright. “She banged her head…”
Name!
“George banged her head on the locked front door glass when she realized she had left her…
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